Staying With It. Deepening the Poem Through Attention
On attention, return, and the art of seeing more
Many poems move on too quickly.
We leave the image, the moment, the place—just as it begins to open.
But the work of the poem is not only to begin. It is to stay.
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There is a moment in writing when we are tempted to move on.
We have named the thing.
We have placed it on the page.
We feel the small satisfaction of having begun.
And then—almost immediately—we leave.
We explain.
We summarize.
We reach for what the poem “means.”
But often, the poem has only just arrived.
I’ve been thinking about what it means to stay.
To remain with an image, a moment, a small piece of the world, even after it feels like we’ve already said it. To look again—not for something new, but for something more.
In many of Mark Doty’s poems, attention is not a quick act. It is a form of devotion.
In “A Green Crab’s Shell,” the poem does not move away from its subject. It returns to it—again and again—each time seeing differently.
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