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David's avatar

Distorted time and emotional gravity is such a rich prompt. Already thinking about where to take it.

10 poetry notebooks's avatar

So happy you like it! It was an interesting one to devise. Let me know where you take it or where it takes you!

teatablepoet's avatar

Tussle,

Wrestling in bed,

Waking at the point of realization

I am alive, pulse is in fact too lively

A reminder of the habist I've yet to remedy

Remedy is the great expanse

Knowladge of truth has seen backlash

As I in and out the co.e and go trance,

I am here?

10 poetry notebooks's avatar

Glad to see you are still creating your delicious responses to the prompts. Hope to read more!

teatablepoet's avatar

Why thank you. Been using them in the background. Might come around some time