Hi! Thanks for sending this concise poem. I find the verbs strong which is a great choice for all your writing. They give the poem movement and clarity. Good question at the end? I like how you address it openly as if to all. It is an important questions.
I'm using this for an ekphrastic poem on a Hopper painting.
How did that work out for you?
I'm a slow writer, but it's working.
Great! Everyone has their own timeline. :)
Lovely insight. Thank you
"Removing these hands from an endeared face
Force away the grime, dust, distrusting rustic flusters"
To air so thin vision blurs
Hair frets skin and prickling is the pun of skin
Sleepy goes the endorphins
Daze, daze haze the way.
For yet we sleep through, another day?
Hi! Thanks for sending this concise poem. I find the verbs strong which is a great choice for all your writing. They give the poem movement and clarity. Good question at the end? I like how you address it openly as if to all. It is an important questions.